Okay be honest to your self we all have been biting are nails at some point.But do you know the feeling when you bite your nails the feeling I have is AWESOMENESS. Sometimes I am feeling that when your nails are very long and you want them to be how they are but you are tempted to bite them you just bite them and then you say to your self "Oh man why did I do that I really wanted my nails to be the perfect size" But that's what some people would say. But others might say "Why did I bite my nails, oh well I don't care that much they will grow back soon". Some people don't even care, you need to care for your nails and keep chewing them because they are awesome.The perfect piece of nail you bite of: You know the feeling when you are biting your nails and then you chip of a really big, perfect piece of a nail and you would go "Oh ya", I think you might feel awesome because you just chipped of the biggest nail every and you should be proud of yourself. When you have the perfect piece of bitten of nail in your hands you might not know what to do with it. Should you throw it out, should you put it in a bag and put it in your room after and look at it all day and be proud of your self for chipping of the biggest nail or maybe you can show everyone that nail and they will be disgust but you tell that it is awesome and they should try.
Chewing your nail and you chew it to far and it starts to bleed: Do you know a time when your are chewing your nails and you keep chewing then and you chew it to much that it starts to bleed. Well I know that kind of experience. It might hurt at first but it is awesome. When it starts to bleed is feels like a slug is moving down your finger. It looks like a waterfall that is red dripping down your finger so fast that it is all drips on the floor and it smells like fresh blood coming out of a dead animal that was just killed and that's kind of sad but it smells like that, seriously. But all the blood you see dripping down your finger is amazing. But now all you see in you finger is a very short nail that you won't be able to scratch your back with and you won't have to worry for a long time about your nails because they are already short and you don't need to cut them in a while so don't worry.
Chewing your nails and then you look at then and they are crooked: When you are chewing your nails they might look crooked but I want to tell you again that is awesome you know why because when they are crooked that is a new style. It will create a new design for your awesome nails and that's okay. Your nails will love the new style you will give them a new touch for your nails and all the other nails will be jealous of that nail because they don't have that awesome style that it has, and now that nail is famous for the amazing design it has and it will look different in its own special way you will give it, and that amazing.
😄 AWESOME!😄
I really liked the figurative language you used in this. Through out the blog your sentences were a bit choppy. I think they could flow a little more. There were some spelling errors and some run on sentences. Over all I think that your blog does make you feel awesome.
ReplyDeleteI also agree with Holly's examples with the run on sentences
DeleteI really liked reading your blog it had a lot of cool paragraphs with there titles and coming from some one that chews there nails I loved it and if I were you I would Keep it just like it is but I would just check grammar because there are a couple of spots with 2 spaces and wrong places for , and . but spelling was also really good.
ReplyDeleteFunny topic, Natalie! It made me smile :)
ReplyDeleteBiting off that piece of nail that had been bugging you really is awesome!
A few grammatical errors take away from your reader's experience. Be sure to revise and edit your posts carefully!
eg "your are" = you are or you're