She made us find our own Voice
I chose this sentence because this sentence made me think of myself. I found my own voice that I will share with everyone. This sentence came to me very fast after we watched a video called " Whats your sentence?" because this happened to me. I was always shy when I was in kindergarten all the way to grade 5 and I was always my face was getting red when I was in front of the class but after I was getting way better and better in grade 6 and 7 trying my best to not be shy and presenting in front of the class. Also when I get older and I am getting in the higher grades I think I will change and share my voice with everyone and I am not going to be shy anymore. So that's why I chose this sentence " She made us find our own voice" and it really appealed to me in my life and I will be not shy and everyone will not be shy and they will share there ideas and what they need to say to everyone and use there voice to say what they need to say.
Natalie I love your honesty and openness in this blog. Sharing your voice isn't always easy and you have really shown your own journey in this piece.
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I love this sentence because it is so like you and knowing you for 2 years at first you were very shy but now I know you better and you are my best friend and we have done many presentations together but before you present anything everyone is nerves it is life and just want to say, this sentence is YOU
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