Friday, September 30, 2016
Summer Memory
My summer memory was going camping with my family and my grandma. We went camping somewhere in the south but I am not sure where but it is far away from here. It was a four hour drive, seriously it was boring in the car but I made it, I lasted the four hour drive. Finally me and my family came to the camp site we are going to stay at. Me and my dad set up the tent and my mom, sister and grandma were setting up the rest of the stuff that was left in the back of the car. Finally we were done setting up the stuff and we were done all are work for today. Before we were getting ready to make the food I heard waves splashing so I thought that it was a lake that you can swim in. So my family went to the lake and we saw lots of people swimming but we didn't go swimming yet because we didn't have are swimming suits here with at this point . So we went back and ate.Finally we were done eating and we went back to the lake and we went swimming. When I went into the water the water was so cold I could not go in and I don't know how people were swimming in this water but then I went inside the water and I got the feel of the water and it was not cold anymore. It was so fun in the water with all the waves and and rocks we could climb up with my sister. After we were done swimming we went back to the camp site and we played some games with my family and then it was time to go get ready for bed. After a while we were all ready to go to bed but there was one more thing we had to do before going to bed , make some s'mores and then eat them up it was so so good I could eat them all day. After all the s'mores we ate I was full and before going to bed I had to watch the stars in the sky there was so many stars it was beautiful. Now the boring stuff happens going to bed seriously going to bed is so boring but until you get to bed and your sleeping it is not, its true.So we all went to bed and in the morning we packed up and left our camp site and just to tell you we had to drive four hours again but it was worth it to go home and see my cat . So that was my summer memory, going camping and having fun with my family.
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in your first couple of centinces you said 'you were done setting up for the day' you should say what you were done setting up
ReplyDeleteyou should of said in the first sentince me and my family came to the camp site we were going to stay at not campsite we are going to stay at
ReplyDeleteall the work for the day not a day
ReplyDeletecheck grammer and puncshuashion
ReplyDeleteReally cool story. There was some spelling mistakes. Also you could add more expanded moments.
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